one minute you’re here and the next you are a snowflake melting at the end of spring.
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Carmel O'Farrell

Nice imagery!

Not completely sold on the paragraph that begins with “Life…” this might be a stronger piece without it. When I omit it in my mind and read through the story a few times it’s easier to stay more involved with the storyline, it’s smoother.

Just thinking out loud… Great piece overall.

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