Wow! I don’t know who is/was teaching you creative writing at UNSW, but they’ve done an exemplary job!

This story was intensely focussed from the very first word and fleshed out wonderfully thereafter as it progressed.

Congrats on a very tightly controlled piece of writing that can’t help but draw the reader straight to the marrow of the sadly diminishing relationship between two loving and endearing central characters.

Very well done!