A Letter To Delta Airlines Concerning My Day In Airport Prison
Dan Moore
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Dan, I’m with Lauren who said she had trouble getting through this. I write and teach writing. I strongly urge you to go back through this piece with your grammar/spell check, then cut it by at least 1/3. Lose the descriptions you love the best. See what emerges. One of the basic rules for a professional writer is “Less is More.”

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