Tell me I didn’t read these words: a Directioner and It’s a brand of adulting Alana never would’ve expected in her 20s. And, the author needs to read Strunk and White’s Elements of Style and learn how to write active sentences. Here are a few tips: Escaping New York with her cat and a suitcase full of Harry Styles fan art, Alana recently bid goodbye (to all that). Alana recently escaped New York with her cat and a suitcase full of Harry Styles fan art. (Reader has no idea which “all that” is “all that.”
Arriving in New York after college, Alana admits to being “a walking cliché of a disastrous 20-something.” Alana now admits that when she arrived in New York after college, she was “a walking cliche of a disastrous 20-something.”
I mentor and my name is Mary Sojourner.