I think the fact that you added statistics and a graphic spoke volumes. And I agree that this is a huge problem that hip hop seems to contribute to. However, I felt like there were two pieces to the blog. The first half spoke about rape and the second began to talk about female body standards. I can see how these two were related, but I felt like you began to talk about the problem with female body standards and then the blog was finished. I think there could have been a lot you could have said about this!