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Vaioleti, I really enjoyed reading your blog on digital footprint and the way you have emphasized on digital safety. The use of rhetorical questions throughout your blog highlights your own reflection, but causes the readers to reflect on their own world. I love how you changed the structure of your blog into dot point form as well. Ways to improve your blog you can use examples from the week 3 lecture, about professionals who have lost their jobs due to a post online. Providing examples will allow a greater insight to your topic and increase the relevance for the readers. Another way to improve your blog is by stating statistics of the increase of internet users. The Australian Bureau of Statistics has some great insight with statistics:

http://www.abs.gov.au/ausstats/abs@.nsf/mf/8146.0