This is incredibly well written, to a point where I was tempted to google everything before reminding myself that it’s fiction. But the weight of your words and the way you structured your piece really made me belive I was reading an actual real story. Great job!
Wow. I really enjoyed this story — as with Friday Foster, it gripped me till the very end.
This will make me respect spiders more than I already do. I don’t mean out of fear: I mean because
Everything they do is about survival. They’re not vindictive or jealous or greedy. They don’t get power hungry…
Wow, what a journey. I wish I was better with words to express my appreciation to you for writing and sharing this story, so I’m forced to use the ever so banal “thank you”.
I’ve been searching Medium for something of this ilk; horror, suspense, thriller.
This was all of that in such a concisely written package.
I am for better or worse not typically moved by works of fiction. This story is not typical. It is so imaginative, empathetic and grounded in current happenings that I had to remind myself that it is fiction. I think when I must do that it means the thread of truth inside the invention is strong and…