American Horror Story
Laurie Penny

Laurie, I very much like your writing style, to the point I was going to share it with my fellow berners local chapter. But when I got to the second to last paragraph (she is offering a vision of yourself as a better person) you completely lost me, I even threw up a little in my mouth. It felt like watching an old Steven King flick, it draws you in with mystery and fear, some very relatable young characters face off a horrible threat, and they get busy in plans to remove the threat. But in the end much like the Wizard of Oz, the scary entity behind the curtain is a huge disappointment, although with the wizard it leeds to a tender story, with King it just leaves a hollow, much like yours leaves me a sad void, and a “fuck this shit” attitude.