“Show passion on your application, whatever that might be, if that’s music or politics or whatever else you’re really passionate about, just try to get that across in the application, because once you come to Berkeley you realize that everyone here is really passionate about their own niche. So if you can get that across in the application that will really help.” That’s a great advice! But sometimes it is a little bit to hard showing your passion. Do you think this personal statement college application example is good? Can it help me with my personal statement structure?