Hey Ryan, You Wrote A Great Post Here.

I haven't Read Cathcer In The Rye but had to read something in High school pertaining to the subject of coming of age...

I remember reading to kill a mocking bird, lord of the flies, and animal farm among others...

I think it'd be nice to see/read an up dated writing about coming of ages in the new remote settings most school are taking on due to costs and other issues we face today.

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Poetry isn't for everyone, I tend to like mantras and quotes, and optimist posts more. I was part of your group today, I agree we could have done more to flush things out. However I feel we did a great job with the time and understanding we were given, don't you think?

I think we should have tried to divide and conquer, their was 3-5 paragraphs/stanzas and 5 of us, do we think we could have made it sound coherent if we each did one part?

You should add a link/post of what our poem was and the original to give your audience more context.

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