The Predatory Society
umair haque
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Umair -

This is so wonderful. You are such an insightful, thoughtful writer. There are some problems here, however, that should have been caught by a good editor. Two examples: “But the question has always been: who will human potential be taken from, to them give it to?” I get the idea, but “to them give it to”? Huh? And: “that middle class hoped and still hope.” Very awkward. Your ideas are too good to be spoiled by poor editing. (Needless to say, I happen to know a good one.) Write on!

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