one of the axolotls’
Hi it’s me Annie, here to write about axolotls
Annie Huntington
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dunno the exact solution to this problem, but that apostrophe i don’t think is it… if ‘one’ refers to consciousness, then you don’t need the apostrophe; if it refers to one of the axolotls, then the sentence just comes off awkly. guess i favor just removing the apostrophe or rewriting the sentence.

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