Adora,

I like that you added lots of photos into your blog as a form of storytelling. As a visual learner, this was very informative, and if I were cooking your recipe it would be easy to follow along.

I wish that you would have edited some of your photos a bit more. I can see some reflections in the counter’s surface and some photos are a bit blurry. These issues could have been solved on photoshop simply by cropping a bit better and/or editing the sharpness of some images.

What if next time you spend less time focussing on quantity of images (some were redundant) and more time on the quality. If you do not have photoshop on your own computer, the school computer’s do!

Overall, great job! Your cookie tasted great and since your recipe is so easy to follow I might have to make them sometime!