FD Prompt #1 — I am from…
Daveen
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Hi there Daveen. I like the honesty and simplicity of this — you don’t try to dress this up by using overly ‘poetic’ language which makes the poem easy to read and enables you to communicate well. The only thing I would suggest is that you focus more on concrete nouns rather than abstract: adventure and creativity are hard to ‘sense’, if you see what I mean. Perhaps you could think about what concrete nouns come to mind when you consider adventure, for example? Things you’ve done, how these have made you feel? The prompt is a good one as it makes us really focus on our senses. This might help you ground the poem a little more. But it’s an excellent start!

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