Where I’m Coming From
Tim Cremin

Hi Tim. I really like this: I think the images work very well alongside one another. There are only two suggestions I’d make, and they are only so the poem scans better: to change from the passive ‘I’m coming from' to the active 'I come from’, and to change 'out of my back’ to 'from my back’. Hope this helps!

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