CP Anthony
Aug 31, 2018 · 1 min read

If you have children embrace the madness and fun,

And always remember, cherish your little one.

A Mother & Son Bond is a nice poem. I copied the last two stanzas above because a rewrite similar to the one below might improve the flow.

“Embracing the madness and fun,

Always remembering to cherish her little one.”

I don’t think you have to change the voice of the poem to make the point. I believe that readers often internalize a poem, thus the point is still made even as it relates to the mother. Just my opinion.

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