This article probably had some good, thoughtful ideas, but I kept getting distracted from them because the English was so dreadful.

You’re turning into a quote-queen, which does not make writing attractive. There are only two proper uses of quotation marks.

Learn the proper use of apostrophes. (dilletantes)

The road to hell is PAVED with good intentions. If you’re going to use a folk proverb, get it right.

Learn the proper use of number and amount.

I expect I could go on, but I quit about then. The better your thoughts are presented, the better they will be understood and accepted.