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Daniel Danielo
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This blog has a very humour touch to it, making it enjoyable to read, and continue to read. This humour supports the key points made throughout the blog. 
There were a few missing full stops and some very long sentences, and then you could also include examples to support your argument. E.g. “teachers have lost their jobs” can go back to examples from the news or just people losing their jobs in general from photos from social media. 
The key points are simple and straight to the point, no messing around, This strengthens your argument and allows the reader to understand the message you are conveying. Keep up the awesome work!!

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