Where do I sit?
Is this a quote? Doesn’t have any author.
it shouldn’t say: his wife?
Great mirror perspective. Is the first time that you’re doing it and maybe is going to be good if you added it in future chapters.
Great little game
I don’t know who is Allan Watts and probably are some readers that don’t know also.
I would probably put now as “NOW”. It’s the most important word.
When you give this examples, give also an a brief explanation. For example me I never heard about this 2 names and what they did.
I really like this comparison to an entrepreneur
I’m guessing you didn’t finish in “.com” because you don’t know if that is going to be the site?