Yup. Try to cut your article to size. Make your article digestible and written with understandable words. Make your opinions clearly pointed out. It is not really clear to me what it is you want to say, yet I understand every word you wrote, every sentence you wrote. Your article looks like spaghetti bolognese. Clean it up! Serve it properly. Shorten it. A well written article doesn’t necessarily have to be long or use seldom used words.