May Allah bless our endeavors that please Him, and forgive our short comings. The only thing I take issue with is that you have said “As Muslim men” when in reality you do not speak for all Muslim. I think it would be more appropriate to say “As a Muslim” since you are the sole speaker in this article although you refer to “us” and “we” in the article.
It seems that asking people not to grow beards is extreme as the extremism that you are trying to combat. Why not just bring forth the proofs pro or con concerning the matter that will hopefuly lay the matter to rest, rather than ask people to join a “no beard” gang that stands oppostion to the “bearded gang.” Wa-s-Salaam