Dermott Hayes
Nov 2 · 1 min read

The bones, pardon the expression, of a great story there Anisesh but starting with a cliche is never a good thing — sleeping like a log, really? — go back to it again and be brutal. Cut away everything that doesn’t tell the story you set out to tell. It’s in there, just a little confused.

    Dermott Hayes

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    Novellist, poet, blogger and ex-journalist. ‘If the cap fits.’ https://medium.com/@dermotthayes