When reading articles such as this, you can sometimes feel a sense of bias towards one side. Throughout the entire piece I felt you were rooting for John Mcrae and TM. Not exactly sure what it is but it feels there are negative connotations to whats written regarding the players but none for John and TM.
I don’t think this article will do you any good nor do I think anyone can shake the feeling off that John McRae hinted to you about writing a piece. Gives you a feeling that they paid you for the other article as a decoy.
I don’t care about either parties, just telling you what a non-biased person feels about your article.