Yes: so much tighter!
Darren Coxon
11

Thank you, Darren. Ha. โ€œMotelโ€ does stick out like a sore thumb, eh? I was attempting to be true to the exercise and work with whatever came to mind from the initial setup. Honestly, I probably would drop it for something else if I were writing this otherwise. Was kind of fun jamming that in though. Kind of like attempting to start a fire in the wilderness with only a plastic spoon and chewing gum.ย ;)

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