Hey found your writings from instagram, and I must say it was a good read. You clearly explained everything, and I like some of your explanations. That being said, not to be mean but I found your writings a bit boring. Don’t get me wrong your English probably far exceeding mine especially your grammar, but your choice of words is not the most interesting. You could try to use a different words here and there to create a better atmospherics writing. I’m not judging nor giving you negative feedbacks, but simply giving you my pov as a constructive way to (maybe) improving your writings. Then again who am I to give you feedbacks? Nice works!

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