I Objectify Women
Scott Roche

Good ideas for changes. I’m curious: are you also going to put more women in these stories?

A couple of other potentially useful posts about common unfortunate tropes in men writing female characters: (https://web.archive.org/web/20120229012721/http://girl-wonder.org/girlsreadcomics/?p=21), and (http://www.kith.org/journals/jed/2008/05/23/11165.html).

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