I think the topic of your article is really interesting and your argument is compelling. You have a long list of sources to pull from which is really good, I would just make sure to have an even number of sources showing the misleading media and education, and the actual individual experiences and historically accurate events. Your notes on the Vietnam war being called the American war in Vietnam is very interesting to me because I did not know that, so it would be educational and interesting for an audience like me to read about that more in depth. Overall I think your argument and topic is really strong, and once your flesh out a draft I can peer review and edit again if you'd like! I also like your photo choice.

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When reading I see your argument as "The only way to combat the evils of imperialism is to end political control of these Pacific islands. Hawai'i and Guam must become independent nations." I think this is an interesting argument that is narrow enough to write in the given space but also includes a lot aspects.

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