“We are demanding that the private insurers no longer exist.”
Now, this is a little malign and bolshevist, isn’t it? There’s more than enough space for private insurers even on top of a single-payer healthcare.

No, I understand that not writing it for the emotional response, going down the details and being entirely too reasonable about it, would just be bad writing, but that line specifically bugged me. 
That aside, nice article! Even though it looks like preaching to the choir, hopefully it gets at least a few people to think on this from another perspective, not just blindly trusting Clinton. Because, after all, the old truth is that policies and actions don’t matter as much as the flow of money.