Eva Adams
Eva Adams
Aug 9, 2017 · 1 min read

Feedback #1

I don’t like the dentist at the best of times and this scene just made it dread it all the more :)

The sterile enviroment of the clinic makes for an interesting contrast with the raw and sullied nature of betrayal. I also liked the use of the drill as a gun substitute, as well as some clever double-entendres.

I expected Lucy to say, ‘but you’re not a dentist!’, which might have added to the tension.

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