Sep 3, 2018 · 1 min read
Being a sci fi buff, I enjoyed what you wrote. Are you a physicist? You use science as we know it, with expertise.
I love the choice of names!
Small suggestion? To enhance the effectiveness of the story I have found in my own writing that if I break up long-winded monologues with actual speech interjections ‘why, how, exclamations, dramatic gestures etc’ from characters, I tend to hold the readers attention.
Excellent story. Bravo!
