Curious, as a novice writer, had you meant to use Kevin’s Father so much here?
Naomi Hanson
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Naomi, Thank you for your kind words. The section isn’t really about Kevin’s father, rather it’s more about Kevin in the context of the world in which he lives, giving him depth so you see him as a completely rendered character rather than someone who is one-dimensional. It also gives insight into Kevin via another POV.

Good luck with your writing!