I liked that all of your market surveys were services that already existed. It was good to see stuff that was already in place, and how some of those ideas could be expanded to reach more people.
I wish that your insights were more to the point. Although expanding on your original statement can sometimes be helpful, I didn’t think it was necessary. For most of the insights, I had a clear idea after the first sentence.
What if some of your market surveys were for products instead of services? I know that can be hard to find for our topic; and a lot of people in our group didn’t do that (including myself). Finding some existing products would give us a good idea of the type of work we will need to do in the future.