Thank you for criticizing my writing, I will bring these criticisms into consideration, and evaluate them.
You’re welcome. And thank you for your thoughtful reply. By the way, my critique was directed at the thesis of your piece, not your writing. I’m happy you took no offense. We can all benefit from reflecting upon the POV of another, myself included. Here’s hoping you enjoy a lovely Thanksgiving. Be well and keep writing! We need authentic voices to give perspective… it is not only welcome, but vital as we all seek to find truth and balance moving forward. Cheers.