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Luna Lai
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I like how well organized your post is. You were very descriptive and used lots of detail when describing your process. I also liked how you used a lot of picture to help in the explanation of your process. They presented a visual of your work that helped in understanding. I also liked how you went down the vegetable road as well, steering away from the traditional sweet cookie.

I wish you would have used a little something more than just corn in your final cookie. I love the creativity but it could have had a little more to it.

What if you added a little sugar next time? A little sugar could have brought out the flavor of the corn a little more. What if you used horizontal photos instead of vertical photos? Horizontal photos could make it easier to see the entirety of the picture on the screen instead of needing to scroll up and down to look at each picture.