I love how unconventional your cookie is. You did more than just invent a cookie flavor, you reshaped the cookie in general. I like how the cookie didn’t really taste like a cookie either. It really captured the flavor of the pizza. I also like how organized your blog post is. The organization made it very easy to follow.

I wish you would have taken fewer pictures. It seemed like there was a lot of unnecessary process pictures. I think it could have made the overall post look a little more simplified and to the point.

What if you took horizontal photos instead of vertical photos? Using horizontal photos would help condense your post a little so it doesn’t seem so long. What if next time you shaped the cookies like little personal pizzas? You could shape them kind of like a bowl and put the cheese in the center. Like a mini pizza pie.