How so ?
Diane Ofili

It needs to be proofread. It is easy to follow our own writing when we’ve been thinking on the topic and already know what we’re trying to say, which is why proofreading is a thing, and why nobody wants to read our diaries... We all need proofreading before publishing. Send it to me in a Google Doc file and maybe when I have time I’ll mark it up for you. Your technical errors include typos, lack of punctuation, grammatical errors, spelling, etc. Overall though it’s just hard to follow, more like a draft than a published piece, not degree quality imo. This is all meant to be constructive though cuz with some polishing I would love to read more! It’s just a bit painful as is :)

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