Gia Orlando it took me more than 20 min to read this.
GotoMars Period

elangelroto Roto! You have a point. I’m aware that this was a difficult read — almost just felt like I needed to put the ideas out there. I do want to work on being able to better communicate this, sometimes (or rather, always) I appreciate the free-form oddity. Would you agree that it would be neutral to also say: “If I/you pity world: I/you will haunt world?” In this case, the human or lyrical “I” would be the antagonist.