i. thoroughness and comprehension (✓)

This is a DIRECT response to the reading, as it quotes not only the author, but a comment on the thread. This article could do with a little more spell-check and organization, but it is all cinched together with that last line. This may be a glorified comment box, but boy does it have sass!

ii. creativity (✓)

The GIF at the bottom is a nice touch, but what about a screenshot of the comment you referred to? What does it look like where it lives? Maybe a photoshopped photo of you and the ex-boyfriend to REALLY make your point. Adding more graphics to the story would have added some much-needed punctuation.

iii. use of platform (+)

As I mentioned, this is just a glorified comment on Planchette’s article, but it’s genius in that it’s on your own Medium account. Anyone can comment, but it takes guts to post on your own page, and something so personal but curt at the same time.