i: thoroughness & comprehension (+)

This is an interesting response to the reading, as it delves into the deep intersection of class privilege, domestic violence, and personal relationships. Your personal voice, as well as an authoritative investigative journalist one, is a unique addition to the story and adds a dramatic, albeit sadly realistic twist to the true crime aspect of the story.

ii: creativity (+)

The use of the vintage photo is adorable and a stark reminder of your personal involvement and investment, though it would have made more of an impact just at the end of the story; it’s double use is a little redundant and softens the impact of the memorable vignette behind it.

iii: use of platform (+)

Each link you use comes in at the perfect time. It adds credibility to your personal narrative, as well as a harsh real-world analysis of the intellectual ideas you’re writing about.