i. thoroughness & comprehension (+)

This is a stoic and realistic response to the Fuck Off Fund. It’s personal, but it also shows growth from the author, which is rare. There’s a final resolution and a slight question as the end of the story which makes the reader all the more interested, and the piece more interesting.

ii. creativity (+)

The only thing I love more than GIFs are cold screenshots. And from one of the most popular teenage high school movies EVER: The Breakfast Club. GIFs and screenshots are still deserving of attribution though (even if its just the username.) This screenshot of Molly Ringwald creates a direct tone right off the bat, and adds a dimension to your headline.

iii. use of platform (+)

The pull quotes and arrangement of this piece is great. It’s a quick read, but is much more dynamic with the use of GIFs and larger text. It shows that you want the audience to emphasize certain things over others, and sometimes they need a little help understanding our writing! You have a fantastic grasp of this platform and I’m sure we would all love a few tips!