RE: East Meets West (Yana)

thoroughness & comprehension (plus) • creativity (plus) • use of platform (plus)

congrats on collaborating with a fellow student, and making it extremely effective. i love the subheadline, the intro, and the format of the poem (i.e. photo embedded into the piece, rather than modified within the platform)

this poem is consistent, well written, AND deliberately visual, which makes the audience wider! i do wish the embedded images were slightly bigger (my old eyes can’t see!) but the small-ness of the images/text is intriguing and makes you focus on the text and image separately, BUT they’re still eye-catching.

the juxtaposition of this piece is subtly traditional, but very contemporary.