Overall I enjoyed the story.

Thank you for your kind words, they are such encouragements for me to continue working with creative writing. Seems like my writing purposes in this short have been (partly) accomplished. About the language problems, I’ve been trying my best being a non-native speaker, and this is also what my mentor had mentioned me; that they could prevent me from publishing in English. Guess that I still got a lot of revision to work with, and I will be much appreciated if you can spot it out here (pardon me if this is too much to ask from a reader).

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