Why Do All These men Keep referring Me a slut?
Shihab Uddin
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“Why do all these men keep referring *to me *as a slut?”

“God *men”, whatever the hell that is supposed to mean. Or maybe “God *fathers?” I’m confused. What does it say about your attitudes toward women that your protagonist is a “slut” who looks at men as “Gods” and believes it’s her responsibility to please them? What sort of lame virgin fantasy is this?

You’re definitely not using the word ‘bureaucrat’ correctly, my dude.

And “women” refers to multiple people. Zina is a “woman”.

These are just the most glaring issues in a piece of writing littered with mistakes. If you’re going to write some poor-excuse-for-“satire” equating sexual assault and coercive power abuse to a woman choosing to have consensual sex, at least write it well for fuck’s sake.

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