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I learned a lot from reading this! You presented good information about the dangers that the beauty world can present while looking at advertisements that do so. However, it was very textually heavy and because you’re basing your argument off of advertisements, it would have helped to maybe have the pictures right next to the text with arrows specifically point at what you’re talking about to keep readers engaged who maybe have no idea about the fashion world.

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