indah
indah
Aug 28, 2017 · 1 min read

Hey Aldina!

First of all I have to say that I lovee your post! I find it really interesting that you choose art as an example even though surveillance usually related to technology and digital devices. It’s good that you keep your language direct and clear. I also think you did well on the application of scholarly research. Through in-text citation that you provided, I can see that your opinion has a factual basis. For future reference, you might also want to do the same thing for your pictures or anything that you don’t own or find it online just to avoid unintentional plagiarism. Overall, great job!

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