Peter JonesIn the Relationship Building paragraph, the Effective sentence needs to be clarified a little by…May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesIn the Trust and Performance paragraph, we should preface the opening sentence with "Research has…May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesIn Healthy Collaboration, we need to add "and circumstance" after "human emotions".May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesPer Part 1, we need to include short sections here on "What is" NVC and Servant Leadership.Best place is after the first mention in Healthy Collaboration, so we don't leave readers hanging, or force them to Google where they may…May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesCan we match the title to the previous description, so folk know they are in the right place?It the title, can we refer openly to there being healthy and unhealthy practices?May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesThe Elinor Ostrom paragraph appears incomplete. Was there more text to follow?After Elinor Ostrom, we need a conclusion, even though this is part of a series, it also needs to stand alone as well.May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesI note that the Servant Leadership discussion has been moved into part 2, which looks to be a good…May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesIn Case Study 1, can we separate paragraphs with a bit more white space, please.May 22, 2023May 22, 2023
Peter JonesIn initial trust building, a key decision we make is about deciding to work with others.May 22, 2023May 22, 2023