Cool! You write like a pro! This waa really a great read ! Just the right amount of sex implied to grab one’s attention , without actually any explicit descriptions; than the run , the chase , the seduction … all just in a right measure with the right amount of things unsaid, left to us to fill in the gaps. A perfect pace. And the ending , not a heartbeat too late , nor too long! I don’t know where this comes from, but I am sure it can not be learned . It’s got to be a pure gift, the talent! Jist like those guys that can grab a guitar and sing a great tune , with the right beat and the rhythm, manage to entertain everybody present and it looks so easy when they do it…

I will definitely look forward to more of your stories.