I just love this! This “feverish rambling prose” is absolutely the first class, bro! So genuine and so original. If I were you I’d continue down this road and never look back. This kind of stuff is going places, I am sure. And you know when I give you a compliment, it is the real thing, I mean every word. You see, when your worst critic becomes your most enchanted fan, you can be sure you are doing something soooo right!
Your writing has matured enormously in the past months.
Can I please reserve an autographed copy of your first book? It will have a special place in my library, right next to your second and your third one. :)
Oh… one little thing: it is up to you of course, but I don’t think you need those quotation marks in the title.