Very beautiful piece!
I like the way you are using full stops to create interest and break monotony.
It is a short story but leaving a good suspense,and as a reader, I wish to know whether Musyoka(the virgin breaker)is returning.
think of releasing part 2 coz eventually it shall be a book of chapters.
i think the story of the uncle can stand on its own…very interesting and heartbreaking how relatives take advantage of the bereaved. so what happened to the mansion of rats in the village? :-)