Jenna Condie
Jul 28, 2017 · 1 min read

Hi Anthony, it’s fab to hear how much you enjoyed the first workshop. The 4 hours went fast for me too! You’ve woven in sources nicely here, I especially like the notion of an ‘identity laboratory’ and wondered if that could become the focus of your post (e.g for a digitally relevant title). You’ve certainly packed a lot into your first post. I wonder if you get a stronger narrative and focus by starting towards the end of your first paragraph and really hit home why digital research is so engaging for you i.e you’ve maybe just entered an identity laboratory, how exciting :)

I guess my suggestion aims for you to start positively, which means leaving the less engaging learning experiences behind in the dust. A new frame of mind type thing. Although I understand if you want to keep that in too. Looking forward to reading more :)

    Jenna Condie

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    Urban Psychology - the critical kind. Lecturer in Digital Research and Online Social Analysis @WesternSydneyU @ssapchat @tindaproject

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